Rhymer’s Block

Got a jump start on tomorrow’s prompt and got it done tonight too – Rhymer’s Block is a typical argument between a married couple, except the whole thing rhymes. It was one of the prompts I set for myself before #31plays31days kicked off and decided to tackle it today since I find rhyme fairly easy and Sandwich finished so quickly.

Feedback would be great – my personal opinion is that this didn’t quite hit as hard as I’d like it to have – any critique would be greatly appreciated. Feel free to leave your thoughts in the comments.

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3 responses to “Rhymer’s Block

  1. Love the rhyming! What if at the end, “literature” was replaced with “lit”? I feel like that final rhyme with “it” would result in a better resolve. Just a thought.

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